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Post by tearstoroses on May 28, 2008 10:06:52 GMT -5
Torn bits of flesh clung to the walls and ceiling. Blood dripping from fragments of brain and bones stuck in the walls and hangings. Blood splattered along the walls and bed. The organs still hot and pulsing laying along the floor and impaled on the bed posts. The last bits of intact body still breathing and moaning in pain and writhing in agony. The heavy slow breaths of a teenage boy standing half en-shadowed half in the blood tinted light. His eyes were still burning from his inner demon. His finger tips slowly dripping the hot blood. His footsteps were smooth and graceful as he walks around the room hidden in the shadows. He grabbed the writhing body and grins as his body shook and his ribs cracked and snapped. His screams turned from human to a demonic roar as hit bones rip and crack to a new shape of Satan himself. The writhing body in his hands moans out a wheezing breath. The king of demons grinned an evil bloody grin as he throws the body impaling it on the bed. The body lets out a final blood curdling scream and falls limp. The Demon slowly melts back in to the teenage boy. The smell of hot flesh and blood slowly emanated out of the room. The windows fogging over as a gentle snow starts to fall.
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Post by Alledyra on May 30, 2008 12:41:27 GMT -5
Dark, and bloody vivid! I like it tears, it's interesting, although a bit more bloody than what I'm used to...but it's just vague enough to let our imagination run wild. Wicked cool.
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